4-13th Homework

Hello [이름]! (^_^)

Thanks for writing again today.

Thank you for doing your best to explain your point of view in the issue at hand.

I honestly think, one of man\'s strongest drive is greed.

The reason why earth is deteriorating fast is because the people on it are greedy creatures.

You are right when you said most of earth\'s resources cannot be restored and some of them would even take ages before they are finally restored again.

If we don\'t stop being greedy and reckless, we will probably lose earth in the next century and our descendants would be forced to look for another home.

Anyhow, this is my view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Thursday. ^^

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Today, I want to speak about the economy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I want to discuss about the economy today.
We live in the earth, even if we want to live another place that is outside earth, we have no choice.

>> We live on earth and even if we want to live in another place outside of earth, we have no choice.
Until now, human has spent a lot of resources of the earth and we have to continuously consume in order to keep our life.

>> [Do you mean]: Until now, humans have spent a lot of earth\'s resources and we have to continuously consume it in order to sustain our lives.
In the economy, the good condition is whether it spends or consumes the resources efficiently.

>> In the economy, the good condition depends on whether we spend or consume the resources efficiently.
Someone often said that it is economical.

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OR >> A person often mentioned that it is economical in nature.
But I have another point of view.

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OR >> But I have a different opinion.
If we see the situation at the earth point of view, it is not economical.

>> If we see the situation on earth\'s point of view, it is not economical.
Humans spend a lot of resources of the earth, but there are no returns for the earth.

>> Humans spend a lot of resources of earth, but earth does not get anything in return.

OR >> Humans spend a lot of earth\'s resources but our planet does not benefit from it. 
If there is something, it may be a garbage to the earth.

>> If there is something that we give to earth, it may be garbage/rubbish. 

The economical life is just only the point of view in humans.

>> The economical life is just in the point of view of humans.

OR >> The economy is only in the point of view of humans.
There is a dilemma.

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OR >> A dilemma is present.
Everybody wants to conveniently live without any problems, to do it we have to spend a lot of resources of the earth.

>> Everybody wants to conveniently live without any problems. To do it, we have to spend a lot of earth\'s resources.

OR >> Everybody wants to conveniently live without any problems. To do it, we have to spend a lot of resources from earth.
But the resources of the earth is not unlimited and these are not restored.

>> But the resources of earth is not unlimited and these are not restored.

OR >> But the resources of earth is not unlimited and these cannot be restored.
Even if these are restored, it would take a very long time.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even if these can be restored, it would take a very long time.