4.14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning? This is a yesterday's homework.
How does advertising influence people's behavior?
Well, most advertising is repeating the propaganda. people would be brainwashed easily and they feel the urge to buy that. I think the success or failure of the sale their new products are depend on the advertising. So I guess the advertising industry also to be great succeeded.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for finishing all your homework. You have an impressive idea regarding advertisements. Keep it up!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning?
>> Correct.
This is a yesterday\'s homework.>> This is yesterday\'s homework.How does advertising influence people\'s behavior?Well, most advertising is repeating the propaganda.
>> Well, most advertisiments are repeating the propaganda.
people would be brainwashed easily and they feel the urge to buy that.
>> People are brainwashed easily and they feel the urge to buy the item being advertised.
I think the success or failure of the sale their new products are depend on the advertising.
>> I think the success or failure of the sales of new products depend on advertising.
So I guess the advertising industry also to be great succeeded.>> So I guess that advertising industries are also successful.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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