4.14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
I agree with this issue. When children grow up in the countryside, they can be more closer with nature. They can also feel a change of season and experience many things with fresh air and a fair view of nature. I think that if they grow up in the rural area, they can become a very emotional person.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your sharing your thoughts about living in the countryside and in a big city. I hope that you will not feel tired studying and brushing up your skills in English.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?I agree with this issue.
>> I agree in this statement.
When children grow up in the countryside, they can be more closer with nature.
>> Correct.
They can also feel a change of season and experience many things with fresh air and a fair view of nature.
>> Correct.
I think that if they grow up in the rural area, they can become a very emotional person.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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