4-14th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you very much for writing an essay in our composition board.

I totally understand how you feel.

Communication is an art.

And like any other art, you have to learn how to do it.

It is not an overnight process.

It actually takes a long time to master it.

I\'m glad to know that even if you are having a trouble with it, you are still feeling brave to learn it.

Carry on! You are on the right track. :)

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름]

I will talk about the communication with other people, today.
>> I will talk about communicating with other people today.
When we discuss something with others, we have to share each thought through conversations.
>> When we discuss something with others, we have to share our thought/s through conversations.
Sometimes, we don\'t share our thought or our consideration.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are times when we don\'t want to share our thought or our consideration.
Even if we have to appeal our consideration using words, many people don\'t do that.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Even if we need to express our consideration through words, many people don\'t usually do that.
Instead of the words, they gesture their thought but others could not understand it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Instead of using words, they use gestures to express their thought but others could not understand it.
So, the man who appealed it with gestures thinks of his behavior as he told something to others.
>> So, the man who appealed with gestures thinks of his behavior as he tells something to others.
Indeed, this is not the communication.
>> Indeed, this is not communication.
OR >> Indeed, this is not what communication is.
So, nobody could catch it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, nobody could understand it.
It\'s because he implicitly say something.
>> It\'s because he implicitly says something.
I know that it may be difficult to say depending on each characteristics.
>> I know that it may be difficult for some people to say something depending on their characteristics.
Of course, it\'s also difficult for me to do.
>> Of course, it\'s also difficult for me to do it.
When we face the obstacles that we could not solve it ourselves, we may often discourage.
>> When we face the obstacles that we could not solve ourselves, we may often feel discouraged.
So, we would lose some brave to fight with the hardness.
>> [Do you mean]: So, we would lose our courage to fight with resolve.
I think the most important thing at this time is the brave to tell something to others.
>> I think the most important thing at this time is the courage to tell something to others.
OR >> I think the most important thing at this time is to be brave to tell something to others.
My problem would be easy for others to solve.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> For others, my problem is easy to solve.