4.15 Homework

2014-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning? I had a meeting in English with my customer from Spain. It was more comfortable than before. I could explain my opinion properly.Thanks to you. Many thanks! Homework Do you always depend on technology in everything that you do? No. I don't always depend on technology in everything. I like the natural. I like slow food, too. Of course the technology is convenient and useful. But I would like to live in harmony with those. Thank you!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! I\'m so glad that youa re more confident in speaking the English langauge now. I can really say that you have come a long way. But there\'s there more to improve. Just be more inspired and never get tired of learning and improving your skills. Take care! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning? >> Correct. I had a meeting in English with my customer from Spain. >> I had a meeting usign the English language with a customer from Spain. It was more comfortable than before. >> Correct. I could explain my opinion properly.Thanks to you. >> Correct.Many thanks!>> Thanks a lot!HomeworkDo you always depend on technology in everything that you do?No. I don\'t always depend on technology in everything. >> No. I don\'t always depend on technology in everything that I do. I like the natural. >> I like doing things the natural way. I like slow food, too. >> Correct.  Of course the technology is convenient and useful. >> Of course technology is convenient and useful. But I would like to live in harmony with those.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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