4.15 Homework

2015-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! My phone's battery was dead this morning, so I couldn't receive your call. I am sorry. How can people improve their productivity? I know that many people consider improving their productivity. To improve their productivity, they usually begin in the getting rid of something waste. These days, this movement is also happening dynamically in our company. I think that the strong survive and the weak perish, so we have to do our best to improve our productivity. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

  Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Please check my corrections for your improvement. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.My phone\'s battery was dead this morning, so I couldn\'t receive your call. >> My phone\'s battery was empty this morning, so I couldn\'t receive your call. I am sorry. >> Correct.How can people improve their productivity?I know that many people consider improving their productivity. >> Correct.To improve their productivity, they usually begin in the getting rid of something waste. >> To improve their productivity, they usually begin by getting rid of things they don\'t need. These days, this movement is also happening dynamically in our company. >> These days, this is also happening dynamically in our company. I think that the strong survive and the weak perish, so we have to do our best to improve our productivity.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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