4-15th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for writing an essay for today despite your very busy schedule.

I think Korea is very beautiful during spring season.

It\'s sunny. The sky is always blue and there are flowers everywhere.

I love that kind of scenery.

I\'m happy to know that you use a bicycle when the weather is great.

Bicycling is not only good for the body but good for the environment as well.

Keep it up!

You are doing the right thing. ^_^
I\'ll see you again on Thursday.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름]

Today, I will talk about my commuting load.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Today, I would like to talk about my means of transportation.
I often use a bicycle to commute on a fine day.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I usually use a bicycle to commute for work on a fine day.
When it rains, paddling is too difficult since I can\'t see forward.

>> When it rains, paddling is too difficult since I can\'t see what is in front of me.

OR >> When it rains, paddling is very hard because I can\'t see what is in ahead of me.
The distance between my home and office is about 10kilo meters.

>> The distance between my home and office is about 10 kilometers.

OR >> My home is about 10 kilometers away from my office.
So if I use my car, it would be 10 minutes as considering the traffic signals.

>> So if I use my car, it would take 10 minutes to get to my office even considering the traffic signals.
When I ride the bicycle, I use the dedicated road for the bicycle.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When I use my bicycle, I use the designated road for bicycles.
The dedicated road is by small river, so it is very beautiful.

>> The dedicated/designated road is by the small river, so it is very beautiful.
So many people are using the road to commute, someone use the bicycle, someone use the electric kick-board and someone just walk.

>> So many people are using the road to commute. Some use the bicycle, some use the electric kick-board, and some just walk.
In this season, there are many flowers next by the road.

>> In this season, there are many flowers next to the road.
So, when I ride, my eye is very easy.

>> So, when I ride, my eye are very relaxed.
In the weekends, there are many lovers to see the flowers.

>> [Do you mean]: On weekends, there are many lovers who pass by that place to see the flowers.
The most of flowers is wild but in some area the local government scattered the flower seed intentionally at spring.

>> Most of the flowers are wild but there are some areas where the local government intentionally scattered flower seeds for the place to look beautiful in spring.
So, if it become summer, a palace of the flower would be made on the ground.

>> [Do you mean]: So, if it becomes summer, the place would be scattered with flower seeds.

After scattering the seed, many birds, especially pigeons, could fully eat.

>> After scattering the seed, many birds, especially pigeons eat them.