4.16 homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank You for doing your assignment
keep your goals straight
eventually you will be able to reach them
Teacher Brian,
Do you think it\'s a good idea to write your goals down and tick them off as you achieve them?
Do you think it\'s a good idea to write your goals down and tick them off as you achieve them?
I think that\'s a good idea into way to achieve our goal.
>> I think that it\'s a good idea to achieve our goals
People often easily forget their goal every moment.
>> people often forget their goals easily
As well as they forget with importance of their goal and earnest heart about their goal.
>> as well as their forget the importance of their goals
In utter vain, It is gradually become faint and it could be far from the goal our dreamed.
>> sometimes the goals that we achieve are far from what we dreamed of
I think it is important to take regular reflactions to be very strict about oneself.
>> I think it\'s important to have a regular self reflection to be aware of one self.
Therefore, it is a good idea to write wished goals down and checking the things achieved one by one continuously.
>> Therefore, it is a good idea to have a checklist of our goals in order for us to keep track of them.
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