4.16 homework!

2018-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you think it\'s a good idea to write your goals down and tick them off as you achieve them? I think that\'s a good idea into way to achieve our goal. People often easily forget their goal every moment. As well as they forget with importance of their goal and earnest heart about their goal. In utter vain, It is gradually become faint and it could be far from the goal our dreamed. I think it is important to take regular reflactions to be very strict about oneself. Therfore, it is a good idea to write wished goals down and checking the things achieved one by one continuously.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank You for doing your assignment
keep your goals straight
eventually you will be able to reach them


Teacher Brian,



Do you think it\'s a good idea to write your goals down and tick them off as you achieve them?
Do you think it\'s a good idea to write your goals down and tick them off as you achieve them?
I think that\'s a good idea into way to achieve our goal.
>> I think that it\'s a good idea to achieve our goals  

People often easily forget their goal every moment.
>> people often forget their goals easily 

As well as they forget with importance of their goal and earnest heart about their goal.
>> as well as their forget the importance of their goals 

In utter vain, It is gradually become faint and it could be far from the goal our dreamed.
>> sometimes the goals that we achieve are far from what we dreamed of 

I think it is important to take regular reflactions to be very strict about oneself.
>> I think it\'s important to have a regular self reflection to be aware of one self. 

Therefore, it is a good idea to write wished goals down and checking the things achieved one by one continuously.

>> Therefore, it is a good idea to have a checklist of our goals in order for us to keep track of them.

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