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2018-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Vitti

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Q) How do you think cities will change in the future? A) The cities will have all one system the world. And cities will have integrate together. So if we take move other cities or countries, it is will more and more free and easy. Also nationality will get all one combine. The cash and money merge will use with all cities. The cities of future will be positive and combine the power together.

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Q) How do you think cities will change in the future?

A) The cities will have all one system the world. And cities will have integrate together.
So if we take move other cities or countries, it is will more and more free and easy.
Also nationality will get all one combine.
The cash and money merge will use with all cities.
The cities of future will be positive and combine the power together.

The cities will have one system around the world and it will be integrated.
So, if we travel to other cities or countries, it will be more and more free and easy.
There will be mix nationalities. Cash or money could be use in all cities.
The cities in the future will be positive with combined power.

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