4/16 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What was the most difficult decision you had to make?]
After got the Ph.D., I choose the next job in a university in Japan.
I was the first big choice in my life.
I wanted to study for chemical engineering when I was a high school student.
And then, I entered the Inha university with my high school score.
It was not so big choice because the entrance system for Korea\' university is very systematic by score.
I wanted to study more after graduation from undergraduate school.
So, naturally, I entered graduate school at the university where I graduated.
Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice by myself.
I choose the adventure in the new world, and finally, I satisfied with the decision.
But, I think the more difficult decision is required in my life as I grow older.
Every moment requires a continuous decision and they make an absolutely different result.
So, sometimes making a decision is very nervous and scared.
강사 첨삭
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After got the Ph.D., I choose the next job in a university in Japan.
>>After I got my Ph.D, I have chosen to work at a university in Japan.
I was the first big choice in my life.
>>It was the first biggest choice in my life.
I wanted to study for chemical engineering when I was a high school student.
I wanted to study for chemical engineering when I was a high school student.
>>Correct
And then, I entered the Inha university with my high school score.
And then, I entered the Inha university with my high school score.
>>Correct
It was not so big choice because the entrance system for Korea\' university is very systematic by score.
It was not so big choice because the entrance system for Korea\' university is very systematic by score.
>>It was not the best choice because the entrance examination scoring for a university is very systematic in Korea.
I wanted to study more after graduation from undergraduate school.
I wanted to study more after graduation from undergraduate school.
>>I wanted to study more after graduating in the university.
So, naturally, I entered graduate school at the university where I graduated.
So, naturally, I entered graduate school at the university where I graduated.
>>Correct
Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice by myself.
Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice by myself.
>>Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice for me.
I choose the adventure in the new world, and finally, I satisfied with the decision.
I choose the adventure in the new world, and finally, I satisfied with the decision.
>>I chose an adventure in a new world, and finally, I was satisfied with the decision.
But, I think the more difficult decision is required in my life as I grow older.
But, I think the more difficult decision is required in my life as I grow older.
>>But, I think there will be more difficult decisions in my life as I grow older.
Every moment requires a continuous decision and they make an absolutely different result.
Every moment requires a continuous decision and they make an absolutely different result.
>>Correct
So, sometimes making a decision is very nervous and scared.
So, sometimes making a decision is very nervous and scared.
>>So, sometimes making a decision is very scary and nerve wracking.
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