4/16 homework

2019-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What was the most difficult decision you had to make?] After got the Ph.D., I choose the next job in a university in Japan. I was the first big choice in my life. I wanted to study for chemical engineering when I was a high school student. And then, I entered the Inha university with my high school score. It was not so big choice because the entrance system for Korea\' university is very systematic by score. I wanted to study more after graduation from undergraduate school. So, naturally, I entered graduate school at the university where I graduated. Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice by myself. I choose the adventure in the new world, and finally, I satisfied with the decision. But, I think the more difficult decision is required in my life as I grow older. Every moment requires a continuous decision and they make an absolutely different result. So, sometimes making a decision is very nervous and scared.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for taking time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it.
I like the thoughts you have given here. Thank you so much! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

After got the Ph.D., I choose the next job in a university in Japan. 
>>After I got my Ph.D, I have chosen to work at a university in Japan.
I was the first big choice in my life.
>>It was the first biggest choice in my life.
I wanted to study for chemical engineering when I was a high school student. 
>>Correct
And then, I entered the Inha university with my high school score. 
>>Correct
It was not so big choice because the entrance system for Korea\' university is very systematic by score.
>>It was not the best choice because the entrance examination scoring for a university is very systematic in Korea.
I wanted to study more after graduation from undergraduate school. 
>>I wanted to study more after graduating in the university.
So, naturally, I entered graduate school at the university where I graduated.
>>Correct
Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice by myself. 
>>Therefore, the postdoctoral fellow in Japan was a very big choice for me. 
I choose the adventure in the new world, and finally, I satisfied with the decision. 
>>I chose an adventure in a new world, and finally, I was satisfied with the decision. 
But, I think the more difficult decision is required in my life as I grow older. 
>>But, I think there will be more difficult decisions in my life as I grow older. 
Every moment requires a continuous decision and they make an absolutely different result.
>>Correct
So, sometimes making a decision is very nervous and scared.
>>So, sometimes making a decision is very scary and nerve wracking.

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