4.16 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
> What special feature of a car do you wish to see or have?
A car I wish to have is MINI cooper because the feature of this car looks very attractive and cool. Besides this car was made by compact size for person. The brand logo have sliver wings that symbolize speed and freedom of expression. This MINI logo make car looks gorgeous. The total looking with curve shaped give us comfort. Most of all, I can choose color which I want to from various kinds of color options. Especially sensible colors such as yellow and red of own MINI are famous all around the world.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. It is very practical and cool to be driving a compact size car.
- T. Beth
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>>> correct
Besides this car was made by compact size for person.
>>> In addition, this car was made with a compact size for person.
The brand logo have sliver wings that symbolize speed and freedom of expression.
>>> The brand logo has sliver wings that symbolizes speed and freedom of expression.
This MINI logo make car looks gorgeous.
>>> This MINI logo makes the car looks gorgeous.
The total looking with curve shaped give us comfort.
>>> The over all design with curved shape gives us comfort.
Most of all, I can choose color which I want to from various kinds of color options.
>>> Most of all, I can choose the color which I want from various options.
Especially sensible colors such as yellow and red of own MINI are famous all around the world.
>>> correct
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