4-16th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay for today.

I totally understand why you feel frustrated at times.

I know you want to give your best in your projects but sometimes, there are some things that get out of hand.

I think, with enough research, patience and perseverance, you can make the changes that you want to do.

Don\'t forget to ask the experts as well.

After all, two heads are better than one.
So go ahead and use your connections.

It would be very helpful for you. ^_^
Don\'t give up! Keep moving forward.

You can do it! Fighting! :)
~Teacher C[이름]

When we start to work with new project, if we already have a little of knowledge about that, it would be happy.

>> When we start to work with new a project and we already have a little knowledge about that, it would be great.
 In many cases, we know how to do it in the processing steps.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In most cases, we know the different steps.
The project we work on would be a challenge which nobody know how to do or a optimized thing which someone already do that but it doesn\'t properly work yet.

>> [Do you mean]: The project we work on would be a challenge which nobody knows how to do. We can also optimize  a concept which someone has already come up with but does not know how to make it work.

In processing, we might face some problems that we want to overcome.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In the process, we might face some problems that we want to solve.
At that time, even if we don\'t have enough knowledge to solve it, if we just have a little it would be helpful to go forward.

>> At that time, even if we don\'t have enough knowledge to solve it, if we just have a little idea, it would be helpful for us to go forward.
But if we don\'t have any knowledge to do something, we would have to start at the start line.

>> But if we don\'t have any knowledge to do something, we would have to start from scratch. 

It\'s terrible.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s not a good thing.
Nowadays, I feel it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I feel it nowadays.
In my project, I want to alter some part in order to improve the performance but I don\'t have the knowledge about that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I want to change some parts in my project in order to improve the performance but I don\'t have the knowledge on that.
So, I\'m very discouraged with that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why I felt very discouraged about that.
It\'s because the part I want to deal is not my major.

>> It\'s because the part that I wanted to deal with is not part of my major.
Several years ago I tried to learn about it but I didn\'t do that.

>> Several years ago, I tried to learn about it but I didn\'t succeed.
If we are students to learn about some, we should learn anything.

>> [Do you mean]: If we are students we should grab the opportunity to learn anything.