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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?
Nowadays, many students are choosing to study abroad. Getting education abroad can benefit both students and countries. Students can get a higher quality of education because every country has a field they are good at. Studying abroad can help students get a wide view. Traveling abroad and studying abroad is completely different in many ways. Somethings are only shown when one lives in the place. Unlike traveling, it is necessary for students to talk and mingle with the natives when studying abroad. Through the process, students will learn how to recognize the difference. For countries, students who comes in to study will help to spread our cultures. Students who go abroad will help our country to be a better society.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.
To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?
Nowadays, many students are choosing to study abroad.
>>> CORRECT
Getting education abroad can benefit both students and countries.
>>> CORRECT
Students can get a higher quality of education because every country has a field they are good at.
>>> CORRECT
Studying abroad can help students get a wide view.
>>> CORRECT
Traveling abroad and studying abroad is completely different in many ways.
>>> CORRECT
Somethings are only shown when one lives in the place.
>>> CORRECT
Unlike traveling, it is necessary for students to talk and mingle with the natives when studying abroad.
>>> CORRECT
Through the process, students will learn how to recognize the difference.
>>> CORRECT
For countries, students who comes in to study will help to spread our cultures.
>>> CORRECT
Students who go abroad will help our country to be a better society.
>>> CORRECT
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