4/17 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
My best dish is cabbage toast.
The dish is made very easy and good for lose weight.
Furthermore, Who is not good at cooking like me be easy to make.
Baked two breads and Put on ketchup, strawberry jam a slice of bread
Finally, That is egg and cabbage mixed baked, Put on bread.
You will taste heaven.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this dish. It sounds delicious! I\'ll try to make this dish in my spare time.
- Kristine ^^
My best dish is cabbage toast.
>> My best dish that I can cook is cabbage toast.
The dish is made very easy and good for lose weight.
The dish is made very easy and good for lose weight.
>> This dish is easy to make and it\'s effective for losing weight.
Furthermore, Who is not good at cooking like me be easy to make.
Furthermore, Who is not good at cooking like me be easy to make.
>> Furthermore, making cabbage toast is simple, even for those who are not good at cooking.
Baked two breads and Put on ketchup, strawberry jam a slice of bread
Baked two breads and Put on ketchup, strawberry jam a slice of bread
>> Toast two slices of bread then spread ketchup on one slice and strawberry jam on the other slice.
Finally, That is egg and cabbage mixed baked, Put on bread.
Finally, That is egg and cabbage mixed baked, Put on bread.
>> Finally, combine the egg and cabbage then put it on the bread.
You will taste heaven.
You will taste heaven.
>> It tastes heavenly.
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