4.17 Homework

Hi there! It's so late to submit my homework. I had a few meetings all the day. I noticed that you sound worried this morning. What's up? I want you to take it easy. What makes a city great to live in? There are several things that make a city great to live in. First of all, I think that smooth traffic is very important for city people. Greens of park and convenient public facilities are help us to live in a city, too. but I think the most important thing is our loved mind to a city. Thank you! Have a great weekend!

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework despite your hectic schedule. Kindly check my corrections for your improvement. Have a good day! ~t. Kelly^^ Hi there! >> Correct. It\'s so late to submit my homework. >> Correct. >> or: I submitted my homeowrk late. I had a few meetings all the day. >> I had a few meetings all day. I noticed that you sound worried this morning. What\'s up? >> Correct. I want you to take it easy. >> Correct.What makes a city great to live in?There are several things that make a city great to live in. >> Correct.First of all, I think that smooth traffic is very important for city people. >> First of all, I think that smooth flow of traffic is very important for city people.  Greens of park and convenient public facilities are help us to live in a city, too. >> Green parks and convenient public facilities help us live conveniently in a city, too. but I think the most important thing is our loved mind to a city.>> But I think the most important thing is our love in mind for the city.Thank you! >> Correct.Have a great weekend! >> Correct.