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2018-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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In 3-5 sentences explain the importance of proper segregation of waste. ->People are using a disposuble product more and more because it is very convenient. So, The earth we live on is getting sick and from the garbage. we have to reduce using a disposable product but it is almost impossible. If then on the next best plan we have to separate the waste properly. The waste should be recycled as much as posible.

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Teacher Brian,

In 3-5 sentences explain the importance of proper segregation of waste.
In 3-5 sentences explain the importance of proper segregation of waste.
->People are using a disposuble product more and more because it is very convenient.
>> People prefer to use disposable products because it is more convenient

So, The earth we live on is getting sick and from the garbage.
>> So the earth is full of garbage

we have to reduce using a disposable product but it is almost impossible.
>> We have to reduce the usage of disposable products but it seems to be impossible

If then on the next best plan we have to separate the waste properly.
>> We have to learn how to segregate our waste properly

The waste should be recycled as much as posible.

>> We have to recycle as much as possible,

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