4-17th Homework

Hi [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for writing an essay on our composition board.

I think baseball is a very popular sport in Korea both among young and old people. :)
I guess baseball\'s counterpart in the Philippines would be basketball.

Most people in my country are crazy about basketball.

I even learned how play it when I was in high school. kkk.

I understand your passion for baseball.

I just hope your son will have that passion as well.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great at work.

See you next week! ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]

I like to see or play sports, especially the baseball.

>> I like to see or play sports, especially (the) baseball.
When I was growing up, my friends in our town played the baseball game every weekends.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When I was growing up, my friends in our town played baseball every weekends.
Every weekends, we tried to find another team for playing.

>> Every weekends, we tried to find another team to play with.
Actually, the baseball\'s full member is nine but sometime we could not full it.
>>  Actually, in a baseball team, there should be nine members but sometimes we lack members.

And we didn\'t have some gloves and bats, so someone have to play without gloves.

>> And we didn\'t have some gloves and bats, so someone had to play without gloves.
The bat was so expensive, if it was broken in playing the game, we had to stop it.

>> The bat was so expensive. If it gets broken while playing the game, we have to stop it.
Especially, the catcher had to wear the protector in order to protect from the ball and bat.

>> The catcher especially had to wear the protector in order to protect himself from the ball and bat.
But we could not equip it since we didn\'t have enough money to buy it.

>> But we could not equip ourselves since we didn\'t have enough money to buy it.
So, when we played the game, it was very dangerous.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why when we played the game, it was very dangerous for us.
Even though it was dangerous, we could play with pleasure.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even though it was dangerous, we still enjoyed playing the game. 

Sometimes, we would be injured but it was not serious.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are times when we get injured but the injuries were not serious.
When I was young, it was my big pleasure at that time.

>> When I was young, it was my biggest pleasure.

OR >> At that time, I considered it as my biggest pleasure.

After playing the game, we walked around a lower mountain where it was nearby.

>> After playing the game, we walked around a lower mountain nearby.
At that time the pro-league of baseball started in first, so the baseball became popular.

>> At that time, the pro-league of baseball first started so baseball became popular.