4/18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Beauty is in the eye of the beholder]
I absolutely agree for this adage.
It's difficult to set a standard for the beauty.
The easy example is a celebrity.
For pretty actress, someone think she is really beautiful, but someone doesn't agree about that.
I think the most important factor to recognize the beauty is a mental attitude for the person.
If I thought the person is good person or always she has smile or she often helps others, I recognize she is beautiful.
On the contrary, If we know her bad actions, we can not agree about her beauty.
It means the beauty is not outward appearance.
My life motto is becoming a beautiful person.
강사 첨삭
[이름], thank you very much for taking the time to answer our homework. :) I appreciate it. I hope by doing this, you can practice more of this language. Just keep it up!
~T. IRENE~
I absolutely agree for this adage.
>> I absolutely agree with this adage.
It\'s difficult to set a standard for the beauty.
>> It\'s difficult to set a standard for beauty.
The easy example is a celebrity.
>> One good example is a celebrity.
For pretty actress, someone think she is really beautiful, but someone doesn\'t agree about that.
>> For a pretty actress, some may think that she\'s really beautiful but others may not agree.
I think the most important factor to recognize the beauty is a mental attitude for the person.
>> I think the most important factor to categorize beauty is the mental attitude of the person.
If I thought the person is good person or always she has smile or she often helps others, I recognize she is beautiful.
>> If I think that he or she is a good person or if she always smile or help others hten maybe I will consider her as a beautiful person.
On the contrary, If we know her bad actions, we can not agree about her beauty.
>> On the contrary, if we know she\'s not a good person then we cannot consider he as beautiful.
It means the beauty is not outward appearance.
>> It means that beauty is not just an outward appearance.
My life motto is becoming a beautiful person.
>> My motto in life is to become a beautiful person.
~T. IRENE~
I absolutely agree for this adage.
>> I absolutely agree with this adage.
It\'s difficult to set a standard for the beauty.
>> It\'s difficult to set a standard for beauty.
The easy example is a celebrity.
>> One good example is a celebrity.
For pretty actress, someone think she is really beautiful, but someone doesn\'t agree about that.
>> For a pretty actress, some may think that she\'s really beautiful but others may not agree.
I think the most important factor to recognize the beauty is a mental attitude for the person.
>> I think the most important factor to categorize beauty is the mental attitude of the person.
If I thought the person is good person or always she has smile or she often helps others, I recognize she is beautiful.
>> If I think that he or she is a good person or if she always smile or help others hten maybe I will consider her as a beautiful person.
On the contrary, If we know her bad actions, we can not agree about her beauty.
>> On the contrary, if we know she\'s not a good person then we cannot consider he as beautiful.
It means the beauty is not outward appearance.
>> It means that beauty is not just an outward appearance.
My life motto is becoming a beautiful person.
>> My motto in life is to become a beautiful person.
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