4.18 homework
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A wonderful evening to you Riza^_^
I like that saying of your \" \'Patience is bitter, but the its fruit is sweet.\'
Thank you. It\'s so inspiring.
q)How do you feel when you reach your goals?
a)I feel blow my mind when I reach my goals. The reach to goals is very hard process and needs bored practice in everyday.
It was like a diet or learn to sports.
This had to planning and continusly practice for goals.
In general I make a short and long term planming.
I think all about of goals would not success but this process and thought for goals is very important.
So I will effort to grit for goals.
\'Patience is bitter, but the its fruit is sweet.\'
I felt I blew my mind when I reached my goals. Reaching our goal is a hard process that needs bored practice every day. It was like a diet or learn to do sports. It needs short and long term planning and also continuous practice reaching our goals. It may or may not succeed but giving efforts and doing our best is very important to reach our goals. Here is a saying \'Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet\'.
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