4/18 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~Thanks for the homework.
I have a favor. I would like to have grammar questions as the homework.
Is that ok? Please~~~
If you could start your life all over, what would you do differently?
I have thought about this question alot. If I have one more chance to have the life, I want to study harder.
But I think that even I have noe more chance to live, I would have the same life.hehehThat is the teenagers.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Sure, I\'ll give you grammar homework starting Monday. See you in class!(\',)
~Lynn
I have thought about this question a lot.
>> correct!
If I have one more chance to have the life, I want to study harder.
>> If I have one more chance to start my life, I want to study harder.
But I think that even I have noe more chance to live, I would have the same life.hehehThat is the teenagers.
>> But I think even if I can live my life all over again, I would still have the same life. That is a typical teenager.
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