4/19 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When i sick, my best food is kimchi octopus porridge.
this is korean traditional food. It\'s taste so good.
It\'s not spicy and soft. and good for cold.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름] [이름]!
According to the article that I\'ve read, the best foods to eat when sick are bananas, rice, applesauce, and toast. You can eat these foods even if you\'re sick because these foods are bland and gentle on the stomach.
What do you think?
- Kristine ^^
When i sick, my best food is kimchi octopus porridge.
>> Kimchi octopus porridge is my go-to dish when I\'m sick.
this is korean traditional food.
this is korean traditional food.
>> This is a traditional Korean meal.
It\'s taste so good.
>> It tastes amazing.
It\'s not spicy and soft. and good for cold.
It\'s not spicy and soft. and good for cold.
>> It\'s soft and not spicy, which makes it good for colds.
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