4-1st Homework

Hello, [이름]!

Thanks again for taking the time to write an essay.

I hope you\'re doing great at work today.

I think taking following a reasonable course of action is good but if the course of action fails, I think taking risk is also applicable.

Sometimes, you have to take risks to get the best answer or method.

Anyhow, that is my opinion in this matter.

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~Teacher C[이름] :)

In this world we are living together, there are many options to choose from to adjust our situation.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In this world that we live together, there are many options to choose from to adjust our situation.
We have to select something every time in order to get the best results as possible as we can.

>> We have to select something every time in order to get the best results as much as possible.
So, from time to time we would like to follow the reasonable action to avoid the dangerous situation.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, from time to time we would like to follow the reasonable course of action in order to avoid being on a dangerous situation.
In this case, we can get the results that everybody can expect.

>> In this case, we can get the results that everybody expects.
But someone, specially a boss, want to get better things than other\'s results.

>> But someone, specially a boss, wants to get better things than other\'s results.
He always wants to see another, improving the efficiency and cost.

>> He always wants to see another improving the efficiency and cost of the work.
The reasonable action has been already done by someone, so we just do it like as an instruction was made yet.

>> [Do you mean]: The reasonable action has been already done by someone, so we just do it like following a set of instructions. 

When we want to do something that nobody does not, we should have a detail plan to do it.

>> When we want to do something that nobody does not, we should have a detailed plan to do it.
The detail execution plan would be very helpful to reduce the count of try and error.

>> The execution of the detailed plan would be very helpful to reduce the count of trials and errors.
Nobody could not sure about the success even if the leader is very excellent.

>> Nobody could be sure about the success of something even if the leader is very excellent.
So, when the new challenge starts, we have to throw a greedy away.

>> So, when the new challenge starts, we have to throw greed away.
Of course, we have to get the conviction about the success.

>> Of course, we have to get the conviction about success.