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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
I think that today's class was so fruitful. I think that I not only have to practice reading English book but also it is important to review what I learned from you every day. so that I will enrich my skill.
1) He knows the girl who has three dogs.
2) This is [Name] who saw a rabbit in our garden.
3) This is [Name] whose laptop was stolen this morning.
4) Mrs. [Name], whose father is painter, came to New York in 1950.
5) I talked to the man who lives in High Street.
6) James Watt was an inventor whose ideas changed the world.
Thank you! Have a great long weekend. see you next monday! Byebye!
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Good morning!
>> CorrectI think that today\'s class was so fruitful.
>> Correct
I think that I not only have to practice reading English book but also it is important to review what I learned from you every day.
>> I think that I do not only practice reading English book but I can also review what I learn from you everyday.
so that I will enrich my skill.
>> CorrectGood morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing a good again in answering your homework. It\'s good to know that you value your english study. Keep it up!
See you on Monday!
~Kelly^^
1) He knows the girl who has three dogs.
>> Correct2) This is [Name] who saw a rabbit in our garden.
>> Correct3) This is [Name] whose laptop was stolen this morning.
>> Correct4) Mrs. [Name], whose father is painter, came to New York in 1950.
>> Mrs. [Name], whose father is a painter, came to New York in 1950. 5) I talked to the man who lives in High Street.
>> Correct6) James Watt was an inventor whose ideas changed the world.>> CorrectThank you! Have a great long weekend.
>> Correct
see you next monday! Byebye!
>> Correct*** See
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