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2015-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! I think that today's class was so fruitful. I think that I not only have to practice reading English book but also it is important to review what I learned from you every day. so that I will enrich my skill. 1) He knows the girl who has three dogs. 2) This is [Name] who saw a rabbit in our garden. 3) This is [Name] whose laptop was stolen this morning. 4) Mrs. [Name], whose father is painter, came to New York in 1950. 5) I talked to the man who lives in High Street. 6) James Watt was an inventor whose ideas changed the world. Thank you! Have a great long weekend. see you next monday! Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Good morning! >> CorrectI think that today\'s class was so fruitful. >> Correct I think that I not only have to practice reading English book but also it is important to review what I learned from you every day. >> I think that I do not only practice reading English book but I can also review what I learn from you everyday. so that I will enrich my skill. >> CorrectGood morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing a good again in answering your homework. It\'s good to know that you value your english study. Keep it up! See you on Monday! ~Kelly^^ 1) He knows the girl who has three dogs. >> Correct2) This is [Name] who saw a rabbit in our garden. >> Correct3) This is [Name] whose laptop was stolen this morning. >> Correct4) Mrs. [Name], whose father is painter, came to New York in 1950. >> Mrs. [Name], whose father is a painter, came to New York in 1950. 5) I talked to the man who lives in High Street. >> Correct6) James Watt was an inventor whose ideas changed the world.>> CorrectThank you! Have a great long weekend. >> Correct see you next monday! Byebye! >> Correct*** See  

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