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My family and I visited Japan on a package tour last year. This is my first time to visit foreign country. Also my family visited Hong Kong last year. Of course, we visited there on a package tour too. Japan and Hong Kong are close with my country. That is reason why I choose these countries. I can't forget the famous Universal Studios amusement park in Japan. It was very exciting. I want to visit there again with my family. And when my family visited Hong Kong, we could meet a kind guide. We could spend an enjoyable time. There were many high buildings and famous street. However, I don't want to visit there again. I want to visit many countries.

Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of the way you worked today. I already told you about articles but maybe you forgot about them. Check this out: http://www.talkenglish.com/grammar/articles.aspx   Teacher Venus^^   My family and I visited Japan on a package tour last year.>>>CORRECT   This is my first time to visit foreign country. >>>This is my first time to visit a foreign country. Also my family visited Hong Kong last year.>>>CORRECT   Of course, we visited there on a package tour too.>>>CORRECT   Japan and Hong Kong are close with my country.>>>CORRECT   That is reason why I choose these countries.>>>That is the reason why I choose these countries. I can\'t forget the famous Universal Studios amusement park in Japan. >>>CORRECT It was very exciting. >>>CORRECT I want to visit there again with my family.>>>CORRECT And when my family visited Hong Kong, we could meet a kind guide. >>>CORRECT We could spend an enjoyable time. >>>CORRECT There were many high buildings and famous street. >>>There were many high buildings and famous streets.   However, I don\'t want to visit there again. >>>CORRECTI want to visit many countries. >>>CORRECT