4.2 home work!
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Teacher Brian,
What things can either men or women do that the other cannot do and why?
What things can either men or women do that the other cannot do and why?
To begin with, I don\'t think there is a distinction between what men and woman can and what they can not do.
>>CORRECT
Of course, men and women are not only different in body, but also in thinking and acting in every way.
>>Of course men and women are not only different in physical appearance but also in their way of thinking and they act in a different way.
However, It is nothing more than different. Just as each life is different, so is it.
>> However there is not much difference between men and woman.
And I think men and women should not seperate what they can do from what they can not.
>>And I think men and women should not think too much about the things that they can do and what they can not.
Because It would be cause sexual inequality.
>>Because It would implies sexual inequality.
Everyone, All members of society must change their perception and make efforts to improve it.
>>Everyone must change their perception and exert some efforts for self improvement.
For example we should be not suppress women or let men do all of the hard and dangerous things.
>>CORRRECT
P.S
I think you are very mature!
>>CORRECT
I haven\'t thought about staying apart from my family.
>>I haven\'t thought about being apart from my family.
I always support you, Thank you!
>>I will always support you, Thank You!
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