4.2 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning? Today is warm and clear, It's a nice day.
Homework
What is the best thing about Cherry Blossom Festival? Share your idears.
Cherry Blossom Festival started on 31th March in Jinhae for ten days. I went to there the day before yesterday with my wife. There were a lot of blossoms around the city. We took many pictures and enjoyed the landscope.We drank some Makuli(it means Korean traditional alchohol). Many people gathered to see the beautiful scenery. Full many blossoms are the best thing about Cherry Blossom Festival.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your knowledge and experiences about Cherry Blossom festival. I wish that I could also visit your country soon. Take care!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning? Today is warm and clear, It\'s a nice day.
>> Correct.
Homework
What is the best thing about Cherry Blossom Festival? Share your idears.
Cherry Blossom Festival started on 31th March in Jinhae for ten days.
>> Cherry Blossom Festival started on 31st of March in Jinhae and it lasted for ten days.
I went to there the day before yesterday with my wife.
>> I went there the other day with my wife.
There were a lot of blossoms around the city.
>> There were a lot of Cherry blossoms around the city.
We took many pictures and enjoyed the landscape.
>> Correct.
We drank some Makuli(it means Korean traditional alcohol).
>> Correct.
Many people gathered to see the beautiful scenery.
>> Correct.
Full many blossoms are the best thing about Cherry Blossom Festival.
>> The many flowers that are fully bloomed are the best things about Cherry Blossom Festival.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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