4. 2 Homework

2018-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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* Writing Task * - Has tourism changed over the past few decades? Of course, there are many changes in tourism over the past few decades. Because many civil servants make an effort to make foreigners visit to Korea. I don't know details well because I'm not interested in that kind of knowledge. I like to stay home.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], thanks for doing your homework. See you in class tomorrow.

- Blair

there are many changes in tourism over the past few decades. Because many civil servants make an effort to make foreigners visit to Korea. I don\'t know details well because I\'m not interested in that kind of knowledge. I like to stay home.

There are many changes in tourism over the past few decades. I think in our country a lot of civil servants make an effort to invite foreigners to visit in Korea. I don\'t know about the details well because I am not interested in those information. I prefer to stay at home/introvert.

Tourism have changed and developed as technology upgrades.

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