4/2 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What three objects you own do you value the most?
I think my car is the most valuable thing. I cannot go and work if I don\'t have a car.
Second, smart phone. It is very improtant to communicate with others and work.
The last thing is the house.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I think, nowadays most people couldn\'t live without their smartphones so probably that\'s the most important for most. I belong to those people.(\",)
~Lynn
I think my car is the most valuable thing.
>> correct!
I cannot go and work if I don\'t have a car.
>> I cannot go to work if I don\'t have a car.
Second, smart phone.
>> correct!
OR>> Second is my smartphone.
It is very improtant to communicate with others and work.
>> It is very improtant to communicate with others at work.
The last thing is the house.
>> correct!
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