4/2 homework
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I rode the stand up board last January. At first i fell as soon as stood up on the board, but i was able to stand after that.
It is easy to ride and can go far away even i can\'t swim well. I was so excited that i searched the internet if i can do in Korea as well.
If you are the one who loves playing in the water, i will recommend you!!
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Happy Friday, Lia!
(^_^)
Well, I\'m not really good at activities requiring balance. XD
I haven\'t tried it yet and I\'m not sure if I\'ll be able to enjoy it.
I just want to ride the banana boat. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework.
See you late in class!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I rode the stand up board last January.
>>> The got on a surf board last January.
At first i fell as soon as stood up on the board, but i was able to stand after that.
>>> At first I fell as soon as I stood up on the board, but I was able to stand after that.
It is easy to ride and can go far away even i can\'t swim well.
>>> It is easy to ride and it can go far away even though I can\'t swim well.
I was so excited that i searched the internet if i can do in Korea as well.
>>> I was so excited that I searched the internet if I can do it in Korea as well.
If you are the one who loves playing in the water, i will recommend you!!>>> If you are someone who loves playing in the water, I will recommend it to you!!
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