4.20 Homework

2015-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! Good morning! It's raining in Changwon today. It is relieved from dought in Korea. Thanks God! Are TV shows getting better or worse? Of course, the TV shows getting better these days. There were many cable channels in Korea from several years ago. I like watching TV shows which are health related. I am watching those programs two times a week. They help me to get prevention of diseases. I think they can give us a lot of useful information for health. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sending your homework early today. These days, there are different TV programs that people can watch. But still, we should be wise in choosing the TV shows that we watch. Anyway, please go over my corrections. Hi Kelly! Good morning! >> Correct. It\'s raining in Changwon today. >> Correct. It is relieved from dought in Korea. >> It stopped the drought in Korea. Thanks God! >> Correct.Are TV shows getting better or worse?Of course, the TV shows getting better these days. >> Of course, TV shows getting better these days.There were many cable channels in Korea from several years ago. >> Several years ago, many cable channels emerge. I like watching TV shows which are health related. >> Correct.I am watching those programs two times a week. >> Correct. They help me to get prevention of diseases. >> They give me information about prevention of diseases. I think they can give us a lot of useful information for health.>> I think they can give us a lot of useful information about health.Thank you! >> Correct.

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