4/20 homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I understand that feeling.
I could imagine how embarrassed you were that time.
I also experienced the same thing.
I just pretended it didn\'t matter. Haha!
Anyway, thanks again. Enjoy your weekend!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[An incident when I got embarrassed in a public place. How did I react?]
When I met a female who wear same cloth with me in subway, I was embarrassed.
>>> When I met a female who was wearing the same clothes as mine in the subway, I was embarrassed.
Maybe she also looked same with me.
>>> Maybe she also looked like me.
We looked eyes with each other and laughed.
>>> We looked each other in the eyes and laughed.
I think specially female is a little bit sensitive about fashion.
>>> I think women are especially a little bit sensitive about fashion.
If we have same cloth, we don\'t want to wear the cloth at the same time.
>>> If we have same clothes, we don\'t want to wear them at the same time.
I remember when I was undergraduate student, I accidently bought same T-shirt with my friend.
>>> I remember when I was an undergraduate student, I accidentally bought same T-shirt with my friend. .
So, I announced my fashion schedule to her.
>>> OR: So, I informed her about my fashion schedule.
I will wear the T-shirt tomorrow, Is it okay? hahaha...
>>> I told her when I would wear the T-shirt. Hahaha!
If now, I don\'t care about them.
>>> If it happened now, I wouldn\'t care about it.
But, Maybe it was more sensitive for young girl. ^^
>>> Maybe young girls are more sensitive. ^^
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