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2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[An incident when I got embarrassed in a public place. How did I react?] When I met a female who wear same cloth with me in subway, I was embarrassed. Maybe she also looked same with me. We looked eyes with each other and laughed. I think specially female is a little bit sensitive about fashion. If we have same cloth, we don't want to wear the cloth at the same time. I remember when I was undergraduate student, I accidently bought same T-shirt with my friend. So, I announced my fashion schedule to her. I will wear the T-shirt tomorrow, Is it okay? hahaha... If now, I don't care about them. But, Maybe it was more sensitive for young girl. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I understand that feeling.

I could imagine how embarrassed you were that time.

I also experienced the same thing.

I just pretended it didn\'t matter. Haha!

Anyway, thanks again. Enjoy your weekend!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[An incident when I got embarrassed in a public place. How did I react?]

When I met a female who wear same cloth with me in subway, I was embarrassed.

>>> When I met a female who was wearing the same clothes as mine in the subway, I was embarrassed.
 Maybe she also looked same with me.

>>> Maybe she also looked like me.
 We looked eyes with each other and laughed.

>>> We looked each other in the eyes and laughed.
 I think specially female is a little bit sensitive about fashion.

>>> I think women are especially a little bit sensitive about fashion.
 If we have same cloth, we don\'t want to wear the cloth at the same time.

>>> If we have same clothes, we don\'t want to wear them at the same time.
 I remember when I was undergraduate student, I accidently bought same T-shirt with my friend. 

>>> I remember when I was an undergraduate student, I accidentally bought same T-shirt with my friend. .
 So, I announced my fashion schedule to her. 

>>> OR: So, I informed her about my fashion schedule.
 I will wear the T-shirt tomorrow, Is it okay? hahaha...

>>> I told her when I would wear the T-shirt. Hahaha!
 If now, I don\'t care about them. 

>>> If it happened now, I wouldn\'t care about it.
 But, Maybe it was more sensitive for young girl. ^^

>>> Maybe young girls are more sensitive. ^^

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