4. 20 Homework
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There are different kind of bullying. Strong bullying can be hitting, raping or injuring to one\'s honor. Those strong bullying is processed in police office. Weak bullying like ignoring, cussing and so on is free from punishment but it can hurt other people\'s soul.
There are different kinds of bullying. Strong bullying can be physical abuse, sexual abuse and injuring one\'s honor. Those types of bullying can be persecuted. Light bullying can be ignoring, cussing and so on, it is usually free from punishment but it could lead to depression and worst, can lead to suicidal cases.
** In your country, how serious/often does it happen? For example, poking and hitting of students **
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