4.20 homework!

2018-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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In 3-4 sentences write an essay about your plans this weekend -> My work enfore saturday work every other weekend and sadly this saturday is work day. So i will work at this saturday after work i will have dinner with my family. And next day is sunday, i will go to festival of flower in gunpo with my boyfriend to have relax.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you for doing your Homework

See you on our next class

Teacher Brian,

In 3-4 sentences write an essay about your plans this weekend

In 3-4 sentences write an essay about your plans this weekend
My work enfore Saturday work every other weekend and sadly this Saturday is work day.

>>This coming Saturday I will be working

So i will work at this Saturday after work i will have dinner with my family.

>> After work I will have dinner with my family

And next day is Sunday, i will go to festival of flower in gunpo with my boyfriend to have relax.

>> And on Sunday, I will go to the flower festival in gunpo with my boyfriend to relax.

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