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2023-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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The most important thing in disciplining children is not to use violence. It can be emotional when I disciplining children. I think strict is different from scary. It is important to not scary to children. When you get scolded, you have to scold firmly and make them not feel scared.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
You\'re doing great!
-Hanna ^^
The most important thing in disciplining children is not to use violence.
>>The most important thing on disciplining children is not to use violence.
It can be emotional when I disciplining children.
>>We can be emotional when disciplining children.
I think strict is different from scary.
>>I think being strict is different from being scary.
It is important to not scary to children.
>>It is important that we don\'t scare children.
When you get scolded, you have to scold firmly and make them not feel scared.
>>When you scold a child, you have to scold firmly but don\'t make them feel scared.

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