4.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon? It is the first day this week. Let's go ahead strongly.
Homework
Have you ever had any accident prevention training?
Yes, I had some accident prevention training. Every time I got on a plane, I was taken a safety training by cabin crews. It always be trained before fling the airplane. In case of cruise, it is a little lighter on training than plane in Korea. I think an accident prevention training cannot be stressed too much for our safety.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! I hope that you are having agreat Monday. Thank you for answering your homework. Have safe day.
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!
>> Correct
It is the first day this week.
>> Correct
>> OR: it is the first day of the week.
Let\'s go ahead strongly.
>> Correct
>> OR: Let\'s have a great day ahead.
HomeworkHave you ever had any accident prevention training?Yes, I had some accident prevention training.
>> Correct
Every time I got on a plane, I was taken a safety training by cabin crews.
>> Everytime that I get on a plane, I take a safety training with cabin crews.
It always be trained before fling the airplane.
>> I always have a training before boarding a plane.
In case of cruise, it is a little lighter on training than plane in Korea.
>> In case of cruise training, it is lighter ans easier compared with flight training.
I think an accident prevention training cannot be stressed too much for our safety.>> I think an accident prevention training is helpful for our safety so we won\'t be stressed when traveling.Thank you!
>> Correct
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