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학생이 쓴 원문
> Is body language as important as verbal language? Why?
Yes, body language comes first as verbal language. Because body language such as hand gesture, gaze, expression help communication make better while talking. Let me tell you with some examples. When I needed to discuss together, I could share my thought well with eye contact and using my hand. When I was willing to accept someone\'s apology, I said that \"That\'s ok.\" with smile looking at her eyes because I wanted to convey I was fine sincerely. I consider that non-verbal cues have strength which can convey a sense of heart and mind.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. You\'re right, there are certain messages that are better expressed through body language.
- T. Beth
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Yes, body language comes first as verbal language. >>> Yes, body language comes first before verbal language.
Because body language such as hand gesture, gaze, expression help communication make better while talking.
>>> Because body language such as hand gesture, gaze, expression improve communication while talking.
Let me tell you with some examples.
>>> correct
When I needed to discuss together, I could share my thought well with eye contact and using my hand.
>>> When I needed to discuss something with others, I could share my thought well with eye contact and using my hand.
When I was willing to accept someone\'s apology, I said that \"That\'s ok.\" with smile looking at her eyes because I wanted to convey I was fine sincerely.
>>> OR: When I was willing to accept someone\'s apology, I said \"That\'s ok.\" with a smile while looking at her eyes because I wanted to convey that I was fine sincerely.
I consider that non-verbal cues have strength which can convey a sense of heart and mind.
>>> correct
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