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I think when the government wants to do something, the support from the National Assembly is very necessary.
In the previous National Assembly, the seats of 80% in the parliamentary are owned by two parties.
And two parties were almost equally divided the seats by 40%.
However, the opposing party has undermined the government\'s driving force either by opposing or criticizing all government decisions.
I understand that dictatorship is incorrect, and the co-existence of political parties with diverse opinions can help to become a correct government.
But, often it either disables the government or disturbs the country\'s development and safety.
Therefore, at this moment, I think this situation is better than beforehand.
However, I believe that politicians and political parties can corrupt any time, and it can be prevented by the surveillance of the public.
I support this government, but it is not blind support.
If they do wrong politics, I will always blame them.
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I think when the government wants to do something, the support from the National Assembly is very necessary.
>> correct
In the previous National Assembly, the seats of 80% in the parliamentary are owned by two parties.
In the previous National Assembly, the seats of 80% in the parliamentary are owned by two parties.
>> In the previous National Assembly, 80% of the seats in the parliamentary was occupied by two parties.
And two parties were almost equally divided the seats by 40%.
And two parties were almost equally divided the seats by 40%.
>> And the two parties equally divided the seats to 40 % respectively.
However, the opposing party has undermined the government\'s driving force either by opposing or criticizing all government decisions.
However, the opposing party has undermined the government\'s driving force either by opposing or criticizing all government decisions.
>> correct
I understand that dictatorship is incorrect, and the co-existence of political parties with diverse opinions can help to become a correct government.
I understand that dictatorship is incorrect, and the co-existence of political parties with diverse opinions can help to become a correct government.
>> I understand that dictatorship is troublesome, and the co-existence of political parties with diverse opinions can help balance the governance.
But, often it either disables the government or disturbs the country\'s development and safety.
But, often it either disables the government or disturbs the country\'s development and safety.
>> correct
Therefore, at this moment, I think this situation is better than beforehand.
Therefore, at this moment, I think this situation is better than beforehand.
>> correct
However, I believe that politicians and political parties can corrupt any time, and it can be prevented by the surveillance of the public.
However, I believe that politicians and political parties can corrupt any time, and it can be prevented by the surveillance of the public.
>> However, I believe that politicians and political parties can become corrupt any time, but it can be prevented by the constant monitoring of the public.
I support this government, but it is not blind support.
I support this government, but it is not blind support.
>> correct
If they do wrong politics, I will always blame them.
If they do wrong politics, I will always blame them.
>> correct
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