4-21th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for writing an essay about your love for baseball.
I heard from one of my students that Lotte Giants and Kia Tigers had a baseball game yesterday and Kia Tigers won the game.
Which one is your favorite team? I\'m really curios. ^^
Anyway, I think baseball and soccer are the most popular sports in your country.
I agree when you said that watching the game live is better than watching it on TV.
In the Philippines, the most popular sport is basketball. :)
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again next week.
~Teacher C[이름]
In Korea, the most popular sports may be a baseball.
>> In Korea, the most popular sport may be baseball.
There are 10 teams in Korean Baseball League but the KBL started with 8 teams.
>> There are 10 teams in Korean Baseball League but KBL started with 8 teams.
2 teams have participated in the league from 3 years ago.
>> The two other teams started participating in the league 3 years ago.
The teams play games everyday, except for Monday.
>> The teams play games everyday except for/on Monday.
I also like to watch the game on TV but I more like to directly see the game in the stadium.
>> I also like to watch the game on TV but I prefer to see the game from/in the stadium.
I have also a favorite team but this team don\'t match the place where I live now.
>> I also have a favorite team but this team does not represent the place where I live now.
When the team come to my living place, I try to see the game at the stadium.
>> When the team came to my neighborhood/area/city, I tried to see the game at the stadium.
Fortunately, my wife likes to see the game at the stadium.
>> Fortunately, my wife liked/wanted to see the game at the stadium.
But my kids don\'t know well the rules of the game, so they first delight to see at first.
>> My kids didn\'t know the rules of the game well so they were delighted to see the game for the first time.
But after a while, they feel bore.
>> But after a while, they felt bored.
At that time, the best thing that their feeling would become is the beverage and snacks.
>> [Do you mean]: At that time, they thought the beverage and snacks were more interesting than the game.
When many people go to the stadium to see the game, they take some foods in the stadium.
>> When many people go to the stadium to see the game, they take some food in the stadium.
It is another delight.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s an additional source of delight.
I think the best seat that I can see the game well would be backside of the catcher.
>> I think the best seat where I can see the game well would be at the backside of the catcher.
This seat is similar with seeing TV.
>> This seat is similar to the view on TV.
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