4/22 h.w
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Q What three important things do you consider when you buy furniture? Why?
Actually, This is the first time that I choose my own furniture since I am planning to get married soon and before that, we will move to a new house sooner. I\\\'ve never thought about choosing furniture by myself, but It seems that It\\\'s time to move on.
I could say that the most important three things about choosing furniture would be price, design and durability.
The first one, or price is the most influential thing because the budget is limited so we\\\'ll have to balance it.
Secondly, design is also really important because the more it suits my taste, the happier I\\\'ll feel with that absolutely.
Lastly, it\\\'s the durability. As you know, Since we don\\\'t use the furniture for a while or a short time, It must be durable enough to keep its function as long as possible.
I\'m really looking forward to going shopping for my new furniture on Chldrens\' Day :)
강사 첨삭
Great job, Elena! You made your promise to finish your homework. I hope you find furniture with great deal! -Faith-
Q What three important things do you consider when you buy furniture? Why?
>> CORRECT
Actually, This is the first time that I choose my own furniture since I am planning to get married soon and before that, we will move to a new house sooner.
>> Actually, this is the first time that I choose my own furniture since I am planning to get married soon and before that, we will move to a new house sooner.
I\\\'ve never thought about choosing furniture by myself, but It seems that It\\\'s time to move on.
>> I\'ve never thought about choosing furniture by myself, but It seems that it\'s time to move on.
I could say that the most important three things about choosing furniture would be price, design and durability.
>> CORRECT
The first one, or price is the most influential thing because the budget is limited so we\\\'ll have to balance it.
>> The first one, or the price is the most influential thing because the budget is limited so we\'ll have to balance it.
Secondly, design is also really important because the more it suits my taste, the happier I\\\'ll feel with that absolutely.
>> Secondly, design is also really important because the more it suits my taste, the happier I\'ll feel with that absolutely.
Lastly, it\\\'s the durability.
>> Lastly, it\'s the durability.
As you know, Since we don\\\'t use the furniture for a while or a short time, It must be durable enough to keep its function as long as possible.
>> As you know, since we don\'t use the furniture for a while or a short time, it must be durable enough to keep its function as long as possible.
I\'m really looking forward to going shopping for my new furniture on Chldrens\' Day :)
>> CORRECT
Q What three important things do you consider when you buy furniture? Why?
>> CORRECT
Actually, This is the first time that I choose my own furniture since I am planning to get married soon and before that, we will move to a new house sooner.
>> Actually, this is the first time that I choose my own furniture since I am planning to get married soon and before that, we will move to a new house sooner.
I\\\'ve never thought about choosing furniture by myself, but It seems that It\\\'s time to move on.
>> I\'ve never thought about choosing furniture by myself, but It seems that it\'s time to move on.
I could say that the most important three things about choosing furniture would be price, design and durability.
>> CORRECT
The first one, or price is the most influential thing because the budget is limited so we\\\'ll have to balance it.
>> The first one, or the price is the most influential thing because the budget is limited so we\'ll have to balance it.
Secondly, design is also really important because the more it suits my taste, the happier I\\\'ll feel with that absolutely.
>> Secondly, design is also really important because the more it suits my taste, the happier I\'ll feel with that absolutely.
Lastly, it\\\'s the durability.
>> Lastly, it\'s the durability.
As you know, Since we don\\\'t use the furniture for a while or a short time, It must be durable enough to keep its function as long as possible.
>> As you know, since we don\'t use the furniture for a while or a short time, it must be durable enough to keep its function as long as possible.
I\'m really looking forward to going shopping for my new furniture on Chldrens\' Day :)
>> CORRECT
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