4.22 Homework

2014-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good afternoon? It is a good day, warm and clear here in Korea. Homework Who has a better quality of life,a student or worker. I think a student has a better quality of life than worker. A student only has to study hard. However, the workers not only have to work but also have to do a lot of things besides his work. So, I think a student is happier than worker with quality of life. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework today. I think that the weather is really nice in your region today. Enjoy the warm weather. Take care. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon? >> Correct. >> OR: Good afternoon!It is a good day, warm and clear here in Korea.>> It is a good day. It is warm and clear here in Korea.Homework Who has a better quality of life,a student or worker.I think a student has a better quality of life than worker. >> I think a student has a better quality of life than a worker.A student only has to study hard. >> Correct. However, the workers not only have to work but also have to do a lot of things besides his work. >> However, workers not only work but they also have to do a lot of things besides their jobs. So, I think a student is happier than worker with quality of life.>>So, I think a student is happier and has a better quality of life than a worker. Thank you! >> Correct.

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