4.22 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon?
It is a good day, warm and clear here in Korea.
Homework
Who has a better quality of life,a student or worker.
I think a student has a better quality of life than worker.
A student only has to study hard. However, the workers not only have to work but also have to do a lot of things besides his work. So, I think a student is happier than worker with quality of life.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework today. I think that the weather is really nice in your region today. Enjoy the warm weather. Take care.
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon?
>> Correct.
>> OR: Good afternoon!It is a good day, warm and clear here in Korea.>> It is a good day. It is warm and clear here in Korea.Homework Who has a better quality of life,a student or worker.I think a student has a better quality of life than worker.
>> I think a student has a better quality of life than a worker.A student only has to study hard.
>> Correct.
However, the workers not only have to work but also have to do a lot of things besides his work.
>> However, workers not only work but they also have to do a lot of things besides their jobs.
So, I think a student is happier than worker with quality of life.>>So, I think a student is happier and has a better quality of life than a worker.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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