4-22th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you very much for writing an essay today.

I would like to start of my answer by saying that, \"health is wealth\".

The body is designed in such a way that as time goes by, it would undergo a phenomenon called \"wear and tear\".

This means to say that as we grow older, our body becomes weaker and weaker.

That is the reason why we should take care of ourselves more as we grow older.

We only have one life to live and one body to use so we should take care of it.

Stay happy and healthy [이름]!
See you again tomorrow. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

When I was young, I didn\'t see a doctor ever.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When I was young, I never saw a doctor.
It was because I didn\'t feel the need going to the doctor.

>> It was because I didn\'t feel the need of going to the doctor.
When I was hurt by some reason, I didn\'t go the doctor.

>> When I was hurt for some reason, I didn\'t go to the doctor.
If I let be alone, it healed smoothly.

>> When I left it alone, it healed smoothly.
Growing up and getting older, nevertheless there are some problems in my body, if I don\'t go to see the doctor, it would become a big problem that could not easily be healed.

>> Nevertheless, growing up and getting older gave some problems to my body. If I don\'t see the doctor, it would become a big problem that could not be easily healed.
If I have a sick, I would wait until it is naturally healed as I did.

>> [Do you mean]: If I have a sickness, I would wait until it is naturally healed like I usually did.
But after a while, I regret that I didn\'t go to see the doctor.

>> But after a while, I regret that I didn\'t see the doctor.

OR >> But after a while, I regret that I didn\'t go to the doctor.
That\'s why the sickness is not cured naturally.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> As a result, the sickness is not cured naturally.
I think we could not catch \"Getting older\", we always think of our body and mind as young.

>> [Do you mean]: I think we would never get used to getting \"older\" because we always think that our bodies and minds are young.
So, many people act like a young people even if he or she is old.

>> So, many people act like young people even if they are old.
Eventually they get a sickness, and they would lose their vigor.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> They eventually acquire a disease and lose their vigor.
So, we have to exercise everyday, and we have to consider a proper activity depending on our age.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why we have to exercise everyday and consider doing a proper activity depending on our age.
It is very important to live without sickness.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Staying healthy is very important.