4. 23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
* Writing Task *
- What makes a piece of art beautiful to you?
A piece of art makes me think many things. It can be past, present or future. It can also be love, friendship, my dream, or time. A piece of art contains long time and other world and human emotions. It makes the people who see it feel touched.
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A piece of art makes me think many things. It can be past, present or future. It can also be love, friendship, my dream, or time. A piece of art contains long time and other world and human emotions. It makes the people who see it feel touched.
A beautiful piece of art makes me think many things, things in the past, present of even future. It can also be love, friendship, my dream and time. A piece of art contains time, other world and even humans emotions. A piece of art can touch people.
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