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q)What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of driving versus public transportation?
a)Advantage of driving is that it will be go to I want to anywhere.
>> An advantage of knowing how to drive is, I can go anywhere I want to go.
And It will can shorten time to a station.
>> It also shortens the time of traveling going to the station.
So it is very convenient.
>> Correct
Besides if there not traffic is more fastly reach.
>> If there is no traffic, you can reach your destination in no time.
And driving is technology that is very helpful.
>> Driving is part of the technology that is very helpful.
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