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In my opinion, the sports are playing just for fun.
Because some people can have too much competitive spirit.
It\'s good for world cup game. But It can give a bad feeling to each other.
And this reason, we must playing playing just for fun.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
Being competitive is okay as long as it\'s not causing you emotional distress. By competing with your friends, classmates, or teammates, you may run faster, increase your motivation, study more, and work harder toward your goals. There can be positive types of competitiveness.
- Kristine ^^
In my opinion, the sports are playing just for fun.
>> In my opinion, sports are played purely for fun.
Because some people can have too much competitive spirit.
Because some people can have too much competitive spirit.
>> Some people have a strong sense of competitiveness.
It\'s good for world cup game.
It\'s good for world cup game.
>> It\'s ideal for World Cup games.
But It can give a bad feeling to each other.
>> However, there will be a tension among them.
And this reason, we must playing playing just for fun.
And this reason, we must playing playing just for fun.
>> For this reason, we must play games for pure enjoyment only.
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