4.24 homework

2023-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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I think that the development of artificial intelligence will give our convince. They tell us everything like weather, news, traffic. It can be our lives more easily. But it is important to wary of its convenience. If we’ll get used it, we must lazy. So it is important to study hard.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
Just keep practicing and never stop learning!
-Hanna ^^
I think that the development of artificial intelligence will give our convince.
>>I think that the development of artificial intelligence will give us convenience.
They tell us everything like weather, news, traffic.
>>They can tell us everything like the weather, news and traffic.
It can be our lives more easily.
>>It can make our lives easier.
But it is important to wary of its convenience.
>>But it is important to know how to use it conveniently.
If we’ll get used it, we must lazy.
>>If we\'ll get used to it, we can become lazy.
So it is important to study hard.
>>Correct.

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