4/24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! Today's class was very fun. Thank you!
Homework
Are you an adventurous person?
Yes, I think I am an adventurous person. When I was [이름] age, I invested some money in stock. Finally, I was almost lost my money. I still invest some money in stock now.
I sent in my resignation to company for my own business several years ago. It was really a difficult decision. But I have overcome most of problems in my life. My challenge will be keep for a long time. so I guess I am an adventurous person.I love an adventure in all fields.
Thank you Kelly! Byebye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for enjoying our class. I am always excited to call you everyday because you are fun to talk with. I thin you are not only an adventurous type of person but a risk taker as well. Enjoy life always, Mr. [이름]! See you again tomorrow.
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon! Today\'s class was very fun. Thank you!>> Correct.HomeworkAre you an adventurous person?Yes, I think I am an adventurous person.
>> Correct.
When I was [이름] age, I invested some money in stock.
>> When I was [이름], I invested my money in stocks.
Finally, I was almost lost my money.
>> Finally, I almost lost all my money.
I still invest some money in stock now.
>> I still invest some money in stocks until now.I sent in my resignation to company for my own business several years ago.
>> I resigned from my company and started my own business several years ago.
It was really a difficult decision.
>> Correct.
But I have overcome most of problems in my life.
>> But I already overcome most of my problems.
My challenge will be keep for a long time.
>> My challenge is how to keep it for a long time.
so I guess I am an adventurous person.
>> Correct.
I love an adventure in all fields.>> I love all kinds of adventure.Thank you Kelly! Byebye!
>> Correct.
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