4/24 Homework

2014-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! Today's class was very fun. Thank you! Homework Are you an adventurous person? Yes, I think I am an adventurous person. When I was [이름] age, I invested some money in stock. Finally, I was almost lost my money. I still invest some money in stock now. I sent in my resignation to company for my own business several years ago. It was really a difficult decision. But I have overcome most of problems in my life. My challenge will be keep for a long time. so I guess I am an adventurous person.I love an adventure in all fields. Thank you Kelly! Byebye!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for enjoying our class. I am always excited to call you everyday because you are fun to talk with. I thin you are not only an adventurous type of person but a risk taker as well. Enjoy life always, Mr. [이름]! See you again tomorrow. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon! Today\'s class was very fun. Thank you!>> Correct.HomeworkAre you an adventurous person?Yes, I think I am an adventurous person. >> Correct. When I was [이름] age, I invested some money in stock. >> When I was [이름], I invested my money in stocks. Finally, I was almost lost my money. >> Finally, I almost lost all my money. I still invest some money in stock now. >> I still invest some money in stocks until now.I sent in my resignation to company for my own business several years ago. >> I resigned from my company and started my own business several years ago. It was really a difficult decision. >> Correct. But I have overcome most of problems in my life. >> But I already overcome most of my problems.  My challenge will be keep for a long time. >> My challenge is how to keep it for a long time. so I guess I am an adventurous person. >> Correct. I love an adventure in all fields.>> I love all kinds of adventure.Thank you Kelly! Byebye! >> Correct.

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