4.24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Most families in wealthy countries are having less and less children.
Is this a good thing or bad thing? Why?
These days, most [이름] people in Korea think that they want to have less and less children. Basically, I think that we have an obligation to preserve our species.
We should get rid of our selfishness. So I think that having less children is a bad thing.
Thank you! Enjoy weekend with your friends.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for finishing your homework. Please go over my correction. Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Most families in wealthy countries are having less and less children. Is this a good thing or bad thing? Why?These days, most [이름] people in Korea think that they want to have less and less children.
>> Correct.
Basically, I think that we have an obligation to preserve our species.
>> Correct.
We should get rid of our selfishness.
>> Correct.
So I think that having less children is a bad thing.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
Enjoy weekend with your friends.
>> Enjoy the weekend with your friends.
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