4.24 Homework

2015-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Most families in wealthy countries are having less and less children. Is this a good thing or bad thing? Why? These days, most [이름] people in Korea think that they want to have less and less children. Basically, I think that we have an obligation to preserve our species. We should get rid of our selfishness. So I think that having less children is a bad thing. Thank you! Enjoy weekend with your friends.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for finishing your homework. Please go over my correction. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ Most families in wealthy countries are having less and less children. Is this a good thing or bad thing? Why?These days, most [이름] people in Korea think that they want to have less and less children. >> Correct. Basically, I think that we have an obligation to preserve our species. >> Correct. We should get rid of our selfishness. >> Correct. So I think that having less children is a bad thing. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct. Enjoy weekend with your friends. >> Enjoy the weekend with your friends.

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