4.24 Homework

2018-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nova

학생이 쓴 원문

I am a making food miniature. I am not good at making but it's fun of making something with clay. I am good at playing the piano , an ocarina, a short bamboo flute and recorder. I am good at painting after seeing cartoons.

강사 첨삭

Hello again! Thank you very much for answering the question. I really appreciate it.

~Teacher Nova

I am a making food miniature.

>> I\'m good at making a food miniature. I I\'m not really sure if I\'m good at t it but it\'s fun making something with clay.
I am good at playing the piano , an ocarina, a short bamboo flute and recorder.

>> I am good at playing the piano , the ocarina, the short bamboo flute and a recorder. (Please remember this one: if you are talking about musical instruments, always use the article \"the\".)
I am good at painting after seeing cartoons.

>> Correct (OR: Do you mean sketching or drawing cartoon characters?)

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