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If I don\'t want to end my relationship with that person, I don\'t want to anger the person and spoil the mood.
So, I want to use a smarter way.
I have to tell the person that it\'s a very stupid joke and make that person embarrassed him/herself.
The important point is not to say anything about the joke after that.
Sometimes when someone played a bad joke, I think that person underestimate me.
If that person is a fool originally, I wouldn\'t think so.
But there are people who often themselves by ignoring others.
At that time, we should make it clear that I am not someone you can ignore.
But, if he/she joked without deep thinking, and it makes me or others feel bad or out of justice, it\'s helpful to stop the person from making that joke elsewhere.
Anyone can make a mistake.
But, it should not be repeated over and over again.
If I made the wrong joke, I would apologize and say I was foolish.
I believe everyone will accept a sincere apology.
So we always have to think twice before talking.
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If I don\'t want to end my relationship with that person, I don\'t want to anger the person and spoil the mood. So, I want to use a smarter way.
>> correct
I have to tell the person that it\'s a very stupid joke and make that person embarrassed him/herself.
I have to tell the person that it\'s a very stupid joke and make that person embarrassed him/herself.
>> correct (we just say embarrass him/herself and not embarrassed)
The important point is not to say anything about the joke after that.
The important point is not to say anything about the joke after that.
>> correct
>> The most important point is not to bring up the incident after that.
Sometimes when someone played a bad joke, I think that person underestimate me.
Sometimes when someone played a bad joke, I think that person underestimate me.
>> correct
>> Sometimes when someone plays a bad joke, I think that person underestimates me.
If that person is a fool originally, I wouldn\'t think so.
If that person is a fool originally, I wouldn\'t think so.
>> correct
But there are people who often themselves by ignoring others.
But there are people who often themselves by ignoring others.
>> But there are people who often ignore others.
>> But there are people who make bad jokes or pranks and are often ignored by others,
At that time, we should make it clear that I am not someone you can ignore.
At that time, we should make it clear that I am not someone you can ignore.
>> correct
>> But we should make it clear that we do not let bad behavior slide.
But, if he/she joked without deep thinking, and it makes me or others feel bad or out of justice, it\'s helpful to stop the person from making that joke elsewhere.
But, if he/she joked without deep thinking, and it makes me or others feel bad or out of justice, it\'s helpful to stop the person from making that joke elsewhere.
>> correct
Anyone can make a mistake.
Anyone can make a mistake.
>> correct
But, it should not be repeated over and over again.
But, it should not be repeated over and over again.
>> But is should not be done repeatedly.
If I made the wrong joke, I would apologize and say I was foolish.
If I made the wrong joke, I would apologize and say I was foolish.
>> correct
I believe everyone will accept a sincere apology. So we always have to think twice before talking.
I believe everyone will accept a sincere apology. So we always have to think twice before talking.
>> correct
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