4.25 Homework

Hi ma'am! Good morning! It is friday. I hope that you will have good weekends. Homework Why are women conscious about how they look? Yes! I think women must be beautiful.The women are more emotional than men. so how they look is important for women. I hate the women who are not cosmetized. If they do not cosmetize,they seem to be idle. Basically Men like beautiful women. This is truth that we can not avoid about that. It is the same idea for me and my wife is really pretty woman. I am very happy. Thank you. Have a great day!

Hello Mr. [이름]! Happy Friday! I think that you really have a good eye for beauty that is why you have a beautiful wife. Anyway, please go over some of my corrections. Take care! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It is friday. I hope that you will have good weekends.>> Correct. **FridayHomeworkWhy are women conscious about how they look?Yes! >> Correct.I think women must be beautiful. >> Correct. The women are more emotional than men. >> Women are more emotional than men. so how they look is important for women. >> It is important for women to be aware of how they look. I hate the women who are not cosmetized. >> I hate women who do not put on cosmetics If they do not cosmetize,they seem to be idle. >> If they do not wear cosmetics, they appear idle to me. Basically Men like beautiful women. >> Correct. This is truth that we can not avoid about that. >> This is a truth that we cannot avoid. It is the same idea for me and my wife is really pretty woman. >> I have the same idea and my wife is really a pretty woman.I am very happy.>> Correct.Thank you. Have a great day! >> Correct.